I spent years trying to learn how to outline so my first drafts would be cleaner and I wouldn’t have to spend so much time on revision. It took several complete disasters to make me realize that for me, revision is the writing process.
First drafts can be fun when the new idea takes over and just flows onto the page, the way Overamped did, but the first draft is no more than the starting point. I’ve even started calling them exploratory drafts rather than first drafts. I look at what I wrote, poke at it, probe it, explore option and character interactions. What happens if the girl who dumps Joey before the book opens is also his friend and rival on the snowboard circuit? Rhonda jumps out, ready to take her pleasure wherever she damn well pleases. (If I write a sequel, it’s gonna be Rhonda.) Can I restructure the timeline so the pace is quicker, so the tension builds more?
Gradually the real story emerges from the morass, like a fine pot emerging from a blob of clay. And like clay,the story can be punched back down to the blob and reworked again and again. That’s what I’m doing with Not Forgetting for NaNo — going back to the blob and reworking it from a different perspective, with a different time line.
With the ghost novel, I’m taking a slightly different approach. In a way, it’s been in a revision phase from the beginning. I look at what’s there and add what I know. Bits here, scenes there. I put it aside for a while, take it out again, poke at it some more.
Writing this way is time consuming. I’m never going to be a novel-a-year wonder. But I like the work I produce this way, and I am once again enjoying writing in a way I haven’t for a long long time.
Heh. Sounds to me like your first draft is your outline. 😉
Hooray for enjoying revision!
Heh, yeah, in a lot of ways that’s true, though it’s not that organized…
Clay on the wheel, chiseling stone, a blank canvas to bring a picture from — these are all metaphors I’ve heard about writing and revising. I love each and every one, even if I’m much more likely to need about fifteen drafts because what I come to think of as great prose reads as in desperate need of something to others.
A salute to you!
The point is to enjoy our writing. However your pace is, it is. 🙂 Besides, I love your novel. if it’s slow to write, so be it. What matters is what comes out in the end.